This blog is for educational purposes (although I feel like I learn just as much from your comments). Dig into the male POV (point of view) for hero and supporting cast, for good guys, bad and inbetween. Find gems or alternate ways of writing male POV.
This blog has changed. I will be writing about what I fancy.
Ask a male author about your male character traits or thoughts.
Amazon links to my stories: The Chess Master, Cinnamon & Sugar, Autumn Breeze, A More Perfect Union, Double Happiness, The Wolves of Sherwood Forest, Neanderthals and the Garden of Eden can be found down the right side of the blog. Another site very useful in categorizing books in their proper order is:https://www.booksradar.com/richard-rw/richard.html
I watched a Hallmark Premier last night called Love-Locks. It not only was a triple
romance but it was also an opportunity to fall in love. With Paris.
The writer engaged my own feelings with what I saw on the
screen. How did he/she know?
The hero and heroine stood on a bridge with padlocks,
symbolizing eternal love, left by thousands of couples (Paris is worried the
bridges will fall down and this quaint custom will soon end). They visited an
artist’s studio and I was absorbed in beauty. They walked the narrow streets
and the broad ways, ate at charming cafes, stayed in hotel rooms that could
only be French.
Readers want this, of course. They want the fantasy of being
there and if they identify with the characters, they will be there.
It is easy to do this for New York, London and other well-known
locations. This doesn’t mean the writer can slouch. He must look for insights and
perhaps unique observations while describing the city and how the characters
react. But what of a small town, real or imaginary? They must do the same. In fact,
their work is harder because the reader doesn’t have a clue as to where they
are. The better writer accepts this challenge.
I Left My Heart in San
Francisco by Tony Bennett, Originally performed by him in 1962.
Pope Francis carried a
briefcase on his trip. He kept a toothbrush, novel and other things in it. I
couldn’t find out the name of this novel but I do know his favorite sitting-on-the-beach
summer read (as if he had the time) is Late
Have I Loved Thee by Ethel Mannin. Ethel was a non-Catholic anarchist (some
say atheist).
We do not have to write
inspirational novels to inspire. Whether we tell or show (better to show) our
hero and heroine practicing the golden rule we are doing what readers want.
They want their heroes to be good or struggle to become good. The reader
identifies best with characters she could aspire to be, in some small way.
Many writers pen a hero or
heroine subconsciously acting in a loving way. Because love attracts love. Love
tears down barriers to that happily-ever-after.
In my WIP (work in progress),
Seven Boyfriends, I show the heroine inviting an elderly man with walker into
her lobby and out of sweltering heat, for a cool glass of water. Waving his
cane at her, he refused, “I’m fine.” This little side step from the plot came
out of my subconscious mind. Showing off the hero or heroine’s good qualities
should be second nature to us and is certainly a sign of not only a good writer
but of a good story. To me, being capable of love, includes an attitude to thy
brothers and sisters, i.e. every person. Sure, the story and character arcs should
carry this preferably hidden subtlety throughout the book.
Is your hero heroic?
Here's a 14:31 minute piece on 60 Minutes about the Pope.
Below are some things about this Pope that will forever impress me. They might not impress my more conservative friends, but that's okay because I respect and love you: The Pope asked for our prayers and for those who didn't believe or could not pray to send good wishes. Francis tied climate change to the deaths of the poor and insisted we act because that is a tenant of Christianity. When asked about gays he said who is he to judge.
This
is not me asking you. This question is about what your reader wants from you.
When someone writes a book, they usually do it so that they might lift spirits
or entertain someone else. Hopefully many someone elses.
There’s
a rare bird who will say I write for only myself. This post isn’t about that
person. Once you decide you write for more than yourself you must consider
what others like. To know what others like you must realize that tastes are
constantly changing. Therefore, it is wise to keep your finger on the popular
pulse. Goning-by-the-way-side are the days when a publisher will dictate what
you should write, partially because they’re not elastic enough to change
quickly (this is changing) to keep up with people’s tastes and also due to the
growing interest in indie-published books (truly elastic marketability).
You
might say, ‘I’m not a whore.’ I’ll tell you, we are just haggling over the number
of people (‘price’ in the old joke).
Hollywood
has huge resources they apply to knowing what the public wants and giving it to
them. Whether it be a Screwball comedy set in the depression where a down and
out meets a rich girl (It Happened One Night) or take a look at the best
picture nominees (today). I.e. Twelve Years a Slave is a good example.
On
TV the average age of the viewing public has jumped from 41 in 1993 to 54 in
2014 (baby boomers rule and spend).
Records
or songs have always been bought by the young. Many of these are love songs and
quite beautiful or entertaining. Although the young buy records, the older
listen as well and so should the writer of romance listen.
Keep
your finger on the public’s pulse. Hopefully, when you write what interests
you, you’ll also write what interests the readers. So you can afford to buy a record, see a movie, read a book.
I’ll
leave you with a true story (and then a song). I wrote a romance novel which
used 9/11 and NYC as backdrops. I waited to query agents/editors until after
Hollywood gave the green light to movies that also used 9/11 (Incredibly Loud
and Extremely Close) and TV (Blue Bloods) etc. After major disasters, the media
typically waits ten years, as was the case with the Titanic (anyone remember?).
I was told no thanks because the subject was taboo. Someone wasn’t keeping their
finger on the pulse. Plenty of romances have war and horrid events as
backdrops. So what did I do? I’ve hired a Harlequin freelance editor to
work the story over. I’ll give the agents/editors one last try and then I’ll
publish it myself. Those of you who have read it or portions of it know the
story has merit and IMO is a terrific romance.
WHAT
DO YOU WANT FROM ME by Adam Lambert (a San Diegan) can also apply to the artist’s
struggle to make love to his audience, whether it be the fantastically talented
Adam or you. 2009.