Heroes
with fatal positive attributes
Fatal
flaws aren’t really fatal ( to the plot) and neither are fatal qualities.
Just
like heroes with flaws, heroes should have positive attributes, but in this
case, he should keep them. You’d think writing a character with a positive attribute is common sense, but some
romances are just an awakening into love, the rest of the world be damned. (Some writers think writing in something altruistic is corny.) Just
as not employing a fatal flaw is naïve writing, so should forgetting a positive
attribute be the same way, naive.
For
example, suppose you subtlety write in a little faith, hope or charity (by
showing not telling).
By
faith, I don’t necessarily mean faith in the hereafter, although if he doesn’t
have faith, the heroine might ask him “what
are you here after.”
In Hallmark’s premier last night of Ice Sculpture Christmas, the hero isn’t
happy as a lawyer in his dad’s firm. He’d rather work on promoting or starting
charitable organizations. His dad, in turn, it turns out only wants his son to
be happy. There’s still plenty of tension and drama to carry the plot. But
there’s more. The hero becomes more endearing, more real. He’s a hero with a
fatal positive attribute.
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Bob:
ReplyDeleteA great story. I watched it all. Thanks for displaying it.
Phyllis